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Post by Tim on Jun 5, 2019 23:27:11 GMT -5
Of course, the difference is that it wasn't Mel's choice. Piper and Paige made it for her, and she doesn't like that.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Jun 6, 2019 2:20:03 GMT -5
No, she doesn't Tim.
Imagine going to his funeral and looking on from afar whilst he's being buried not able to approach his wife and young child telling them what really happened because they wouldn't believe Mel obviously.
That would cut her up emotionally knowing she couldn't say anything and apologise for it which she might have a hard time accepting and would have to live with the rest of her life then.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Jun 6, 2019 4:23:30 GMT -5
CHARMED - (TV-14, L, V).
Air Date: Sunday 11 October 2002 Time Slot: 8:00 PM-10:00 PM EST on The WB
Season 4 Episode 22: "Oh My Goddess Part 1 and 2" (Feature Length Finale).
Mel has apocalyptic dreams about earthquakes, death and destruction which she gets her father Leo to inform the Elders about.
Her and Paige venture to Greece finding out from town locals about a hole in the ground which opened up that they discover afar whilst scientists and Greek police investigate.
Freezing the scene via a spell Mel touches the ground and gets a vision on someone opening the crack with ancient beings coming out of it.
Back at the manor whilst looking through the BOS Paige and Piper discuss what happened before the latter and Leo have a marriage counselling session.
Mel pops in from her bedroom with a large book attuning how the people in the ground were most likely Titans from ancient Greece which Piper thinks is nuts obviously owing them to be myths.
Leo orbs in saying a White Lighter's missing which plays out in flashback form when one of the Titans stones them solid.
Paige wonders if a Dark Lighter did that which Mel replies not if it was connected to the Titans somehow and the hole in the ground they found in Greece.
Leo asks Mel if that is correct which explaining her vision she thinks it is.
Piper ponders why Titans would be after White Lighters then if that was the case which Mel says is strange because originally they and the Greek Gods and Goddesses thought to win control of Earth which the Gods won over and ruled on afterwards but in time grew power mad and hungry making people on Earth stop worshipping them or go to their temples or offer up anything anymore so the deities started fading away like in 'Percy Jackson' except the big main ones Zeus, Hera, Hades, Ares, Poseidon, Athena, Artemis and Aphrodite who erected statues in 'Mount Olympus' and placed their spirits inside them so they'd live on for eternity.
Paige questions how they defeat them which Mel adds only the deities could unfortunately by sending them to Tartarus in the ground of course.
Piper considers cancelling marriage counselling but Mel and Paige get her and Leo to go saying they'll see if there's any other way of defeating the Titans they don't know about seeing how the couples rescheduled 2 times already due to supernatural events.
Leo leaves marriage counselling when word gets out a second White Lighters missing.
Back in the attic Paige considers luring the Titan who stoned the first White Lighter trying to attract them which Mel thinks is dangerous and is right then when the female stones her Aunt obviously.
Orbing in a mysterious man throws some potions Mel and Paige made having sunglasses on protecting him from the Titans glare before introducing himself as Chris Perry from the future.
Mel and Chris discuss Paige before Piper walks in whom Mel introduces to Chris.
Piper asks if he's a relative of there's attuting to when Mel first came back pretending to be a student lighter then.
Discounting this he gets Mel to have a vision if they don't believe him which touching Chris she gets nothing on him.
Leo orbs back saying a second White Lighter's missing before looking on shocked at Paige stoned then.
He comments the reason why Titans are after White Lighters then is to steal their orbing power as the Warlock Eames did so they can go up there and find out from the Elders where 'Mount Olympus' is whom they kept guard over after the deities put their spirits inside statues making it invisible so no-one would find and realise them until an upper-level demon did the Titans recently.
The Titans want to reclaim 'Mount Olympus' as their own by overthrowing the gods and goddesses there after killing the Elders to gain the ability to unmask it which the Charmed Ones try to stop them do with the help of Chris who works with various magical creatures and Mel unstoning Paige who originally died in the future from that obviously.
The Elders who aren't killed up there flee down to Earth and hide.
Chris tells the P03 they must become goddesses to defeat the Titans and gets Leo to orb them to 'Mount Olympus' and say a power of three spells to realise the spirits of Artemis who Mel becomes, Demeter who Piper becomes, and Athena who Paige becomes which they do changing themselves completely and not just their appearances unbecoming the Charmed Ones then on.
The goddesses ask why they've been freed and Chris explains the situation but doesn't bargain two of them wanting to do their own things instead of their planned mission of course.
Athena and Artemis go their separate ways with Artemis going to 'San Francisco' zoo attempting to free the animals there and Athena war army making leaving it up to Chris to get Demeter to reason with her family so they work together and come up with a plan which Chris explains was the reason why they became those particular goddesses because Demeter can keep the other two focused and grounded whilst Athena works out how to defeat the Titans and Artemis tracks them.
The Titans hearing about the resurrection search for the person who took the girls to 'Mount Olympus' and attempt to try to kill Leo up there who's invisible upon Chris's request to protect 'Elderland' and any surviving Elders there.
The three goddesses face the Titans in 'Olympus' and overthrow them after Leo becomes an Elder before removing their spirits afterwards and then have to face up to what happens afterwards concerning Leo and his new found status which Piper and their daughter Melissa don't like particularly.
The story ends with Chris becoming the Charmed Ones new whitelighter and him sending to Leo to Valhalla which not only changes his future of course but something which happens afterwards that has a huge effect on Mel's future also.
End Of Feature Length Episode.
-Melindahalliwell.
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Post by Tim on Jun 6, 2019 12:26:03 GMT -5
Hey, you actually set this in Greece.
Makes sense, since they based this episode on Greek myths and such.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Jun 6, 2019 13:31:26 GMT -5
Some of it yes.
The episode's based on Greek mythology which I like and so wanted it to relate to that as close as possible hence the Greek setting with 'Mount Olympus' and the ground cracking being an entrance to Tartarus etc then.
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Post by Tim on Jun 6, 2019 17:23:27 GMT -5
The episode's based on Greek mythology which I like and so wanted it to relate to that as close as possible hence the Greek setting with 'Mount Olympus' and the ground cracking being an entrance to Tartarus etc then.
Better than the rubbish Kernus gave us.
Have to smile at the mention of Tartarus, consider it shows up in the reboot
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Dec 18, 2019 8:34:46 GMT -5
My fourth fan fiction series press release based on season 2's 'Astral Monkey' which I've not written yet that with has the changed characters of Prue and Phoebe to Melissa and Paige.
CHARMED - (TV-14, L, V).
Air Date: Sunday 4th November 2001
Time Slot: 8:00 PM-9:00 PM EST on The WB
Season 3 Episode 09: "Astral Monkey"
Leo and Piper are in the kitchen eating breakfast when Paige white lighter training with Melissa who used to be half one herself walks in with the post and Piper reads a letter from Dr Williamson at San Francisco Memorial hospital asking her and Mel to come in for routine blood work to see how their faring since both being cured from Arroyo Fever the year before.
Mel's upstairs in the bathroom.
Piper's shocked seeing the letter which Paige inquiries about.
Leo explains what happened concerning her and Piper both getting the disease, Prue and Phoebe transferring that into a puppet, the ensuring consequences, him healing Mel and Piper losing his wings in the process, and Mel being the Charmed Ones white lighter then on for the time being.
Piper says she and her sisters made him forget what happened when the event ended via a spell and destroyed any evidence linking them paperwork, blood samples etc which is why Piper's concerned receiving the letter being why Williamson suddenly remembers.
Leo says like what would've happened with Maggie if the Darklighter had made Mel die and the good luck spell she'd cast broke is the reason Williamson remember's because the memory spell Prue, Piper, and Phoebe cast broke to when Piper's sisters died making that no longer valid or the letter could be fake Paige wonders.
Leo replies they won't know unless they find out of course.
Dr Williamson has four caged monkeys with Prue, Piper, Phoebe, and Mel's name on them. He talks with a Dr Jeffries, on the phone whose yanked funding for his universal-antibody project.
Dr Jefferies hangs up soon afterward.
Frustrated he gets samples of Prue, Piper, Phoebe, and Melissa’s blood previously unknown about and puts all four inside a syringe then opens 'Prue' monkeys cage and goes to inject it but he magically flings the syringe into Williamson’s neck before he does that naturally.
Mel puzzles what she'll do concerning her pregnancy test she's holding amid her and Sam Winchester's one night stand two weeks ago and the ill timing effect it has now with her, Piper, and Paige going after Shax and the Source.
Knocking on the bathroom door Paige prompts Mel shoving the stick inside her pocket prior to her opening the door asking what's up.
Paige tells her the current situation and they leave with Mel getting her coat from her bedroom wardrobe putting the pregnancy stick underneath her underwear in her drawer before walking downstairs subsequent.
Ten minutes later Dr Williamson patches his neck up as the monkeys become more agitated. He tries shushing them but inadvertently flings a vial of blood into the wall, shattering them.
Dr Jeffries enters and Dr Williamson freezes then unknowingly unfreezes him.
Dr Jeffries suggests Dr Williamson take some time off as his sisters in the hospital and thinks it's been weighing a lot on him.
When Dr Williamson demands contact with the Halliwells again Dr Jeffries orders him to clear out his lab.
Nurse Jordan walks in telling the latest development on Dr Williamson's sister. They leave seeing her then.
The Charmed Ones find Williamson's lab after asking directions beforehand walking in seeing the monkeys cages confirming what Piper received and Leo told them was true.
Mel bewildered with one hand over her mouth gives a once over of the monkeys commenting they look okay.
Paige, jolts why they have Piper's sister’s names then her's and Mel's with priority included on top of their cages which Piper has no idea why.
She notices voluminous files with each person's name roughly written on Dr Williamson's desk and numerous tests run on their blood that shocks Paige considering what Piper told her she, Prue, and Phoebe did ridding any evidence previously.
Monkey Prue waves a hand making a banana float in midair.
Monkey Piper freezes it.
Monkey-Melissa who has Mel's half white lighter powers from before she swapped those with Phoebe 'All Hell Breaks Loose' orbs from his cage trying to get it unsuccessfully.
The girls wonder what's going on.
Mel picks up monkey Melissa seeing Dr Williamson blasting the vial off the table with her late aunt’s power through her first past premonition which she informs Piper and Paige off.
Whilst gathering the monkeys, paperwork and blood samples they converse how the Dr may've got telekinesis which Mel says they'll figure out once they get home.
Grabbing an empty hospital waste basket they put everything inside close the lid then vacating the premises carefully making sure no-one sees them.
Dr Williamson talks with his brother in law about his sister’s condition and her awaiting kidney transplant operation.
Larry a cop dislikes the fact she's at the bottom of the list whilst criminals get released on technicalities.
Dr Williamson has a premonition of Larry having a heart attack. He calls for a crash team. Seconds later, Larry collapses.
Dr Williamson goes to the records room and asks an employee there to print a list of criminals who have recently been released from the jail ward.
At the manor Piper, Mel, and Paige discuss the monkey and Dr Williamson situation.
Leo orbs in as Mel's commenting.
The paperwork and note books they saw were a culmination of what he remembered written down and his thoughts afterwards and tests performed with the blood samples being an unknown batch her and the others didn't know off.
Mel and Piper’s name had ‘Priority’ written on the top of their monkey’s cages because they’d both had Arroyo Fever previously.
Paige questions why Williamson has telekinesis and the monkeys her sisters and Mel’s powers then which Leo states is because the girls powers flow through their blood as did Prue and Phoebe's.
Non magical people can't handle them because they weren't born with the ability to meaning anyone who has them will go mad.
Mel confirms this explaining why her cousins and her never gave blood in her original future after they became witches.
Piper berets herself with all this happening because her sisters and her broke the rules which never should’ve happened meaning she then Mel should’ve died originally.
Paige says Piper, Prue, and Phoebe didn’t know two of them would die months later negating the memory spell then.
Leo worries what'll happen if the monkeys or Williamson discovers what the first Charmed Ones second powers were.
Piper digests they'll need a power stripping potion to get those out of Williamson and the monkeys which she'll make so the girls aren't exposed like the time then.
Dr Williamson blasts the door down of a drug dealer, called Benny Ritter. Benny pulls his gun, but Dr Williamson freezes then flings him across the room.
He sedates Benny and cuts out a kidney.
Whilst making the potion Piper notices monkey Melissa orbing to the fruit bowl to get a banana which astral monkey Phoebe gets subsequent peeling it, monkey Piper and monkey Prue argue over the kitchen TV remote control unknowingly turning over the channels which monkey Prue flings away before monkey Piper blows that up.
Mel and Paige run hearing that as Piper ascertains she needs to work faster then.
The KCSF news channel reports the unknown as of yet attempted murder downtown which the girls reckon Williamson might've done after Mel sees him having handled Benny.
They ask Leo to keep an eye on the monkeys whilst Piper continues making the potion stating monkey Melissa can't orb far yet it would seem nor monkey Phoebe astral project far yet itself meaning he should be okay keeping them all in one room for the time being.
Having cast a spell recalling Mel's premonition whilst scrying over a map she and Paige meet Darryl up at Benny's location which they afterwards acquired.
Mel an ex doctor speculates Benny was probably sedated before his chest was opened by Williamson removing whatever organ he took confirming his identity to Darryl; how the incision was precisely cut then expertly stitched up avoiding infection.
He's told the situations supernatural which must be kept quiet.
At the hospital Mel and Paige overhear Nurse Jordan telling a secretary of Dr Williamson's premonition earlier alerting them he has another power then.
Mel casts a freezing spell on the employee in the records room finding Dr Williamson's request for the jail patients which they print of the computer.
Dr Williamson comes in with the harvested kidney which he gives to a nurse saying it's a match for his sister so she can have her transplant before he leaves.
In the kitchen Piper slips the potion into baby bottles for the monkeys. She has monkey Prue try to draw a banana to her. The monkey manages to get the banana out of Mel's hand, but before it can get to her, she loses what were Prue's powers obviously.
Darryl stops by saying Dr Williamson went after two more released prisoners from the jail ward Frank McNamara and Arlen Jackson.
The first a guy who'd sold guns to children having had his heart cut out.
Dr Williamson didn't stitch either person up letting them die making him more dangerous meaning Darryl needed to arrest the guy sooner than later.
Piper proclaims having their powers he may well kill him so they need to strip those from Williamson immediately.
Darryl ponders if the girl's might know whose his next victim is which getting out the hospital; list Piper points out lastly is Sally Doppler.
At a warehouse, she works on something when Williamson walks in.
Sally throws an object which he tries to freeze but blows up instead surprising Williamson discovering another power he's has then.
She gets up and tries running away as Williamson walks to get her momentarily.
His names called out as Paige runs in orbing him against a wall as Sally gets away.
Piper mentions Williamson's hurting people, but he won't listen to her.
Piper tries getting him to drink the potion.
Instead, he flings both Piper and Paige across the room smashing their potion bottles there.
Mel tells Williamson about the oath he took as a doctor the same one she did when she was one in her future which Williamson bites back bating it doesn't work when good people die or get hurt whilst criminals roam free.
She understands his opinion but still comments the oath which Williamson no longer follows.
Mel projects in behind ready to stop him but Williamson sends astral Mel flying causing that to disappear prior to hitting the wall.
Moving the last potion bottle to him he smashes that before walking away.
Back home Paige wants to scry for Williamson which Mel says, "No." since he has their powers, they’ll only find themselves.
She asks Piper whether anymore potion could be done.
Piper responds. “No.” also because it would take too long and there out of one ingredient.
Paige dreads they may’ve to kill him and how will they find him prompting Mel’s head shaking. “We don’t kill humans.” Despite Williamson having killed two himself because of the witches moral code and the fact it weren’t his fault the way he’d become mentioning a past boyfriend of hers in her future who was a controlling person that found out she was a witch and tried to kill her whom she inadvertently did that back to regretting her actions afterwards.
Her aunt continues what if the situation arises where he or they leave no choice but to do that of course.
Mel stipulates they still won’t kill him and that they can find him by Paige sensing him which she and Mel had been working on recently.
Paige wonders wouldn't she just sense themselves the same as scrying then?
Her niece utters she would focus on his image, not their powers and with her help through a spell that would allow Paige to sense over a long distance until she can do it herself they do it successfully when Mel holds Paige’s hands out also getting her to clear mind seeing Williamson's face focusing on that.
He’s in a trash-strewn ally with junkies everywhere.
Dr Williamson throws a scalpel, but Piper running in freezes it as the junkies flee.
He tries blowing them up but Paige able to orb only in the same area so far does thus with Piper and Melissa reforming back in their current spot.
Williamson tries freezing them which doesn’t work then flings a saw blade that Paige orbs away.
Piper attempts freezing, him but he fights through it.
The man flings another saw blade, but Paige repels that back making Williamson quickly freeze it.
Projecting behind astral Mel throws an already made sleeping potion causing the man to drop after he turns around seeing her.
She disappears before the trio say a power stripping spell then phone the Police anomalously.
Back at the manor, Piper and Melissa with Paige whose there before going back to her loft burn the remaining evidence having got rid of the last blood samples making sure no copies of any of those existed beforehand.
The monkeys beside them will be sent back to San Francisco zoo where they were stolen from tomorrow which the owners are grateful about.
Piper burns Williamson's hospital letter feeling responsible again about what happened telling Mel and Paige the man’s first name was Curtis who was a charitable person just wanting to save lives which her daughter knowing the profession herself understands.
Paige notes the incident was unfortunate but that Mel and Piper have learned something from it hopefully and the fact the Police wouldn't believe anything Curtis said what with the evidence destroyed because he's already implicated in the murders he committed that Paige retorts he needs to pay for even though the situation that made him do them wasn't his fault entirely which don't make Piper feel any better obviously thinking what effect it'd have on his family as the camera holds on them prior to fading out then.
-Melindahalliwell.
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Post by Tim on Dec 18, 2019 12:15:56 GMT -5
That's a long time to wait for the episode. Think you have one zero too many there
Hey, they were able to stop Williamson without killing him. Granted, he's going to jail for murder, but at least he's alive.
Of course, Piper still feels bad about it. Nice touch.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Dec 18, 2019 14:15:31 GMT -5
Thanks. I changed the air date and thought Curtis shouldn't have died like Rick did season 6 but stopped instead because the first Charmed Ones however this time without Prue and Phoebe were responsible still for what happened to him and that when those two died the memory spell would've broken then because all three cast it.
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Post by Tim on Dec 18, 2019 17:31:08 GMT -5
Truth be told, I think that they could have found a way to stop him without killing him. At least they felt something about it, unlike Rick, where they didn't give a damn.
You showed us a way they could have done it.
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Post by Dark Avenger on Jan 2, 2020 20:57:56 GMT -5
Very cool episode. I'm slowly catching up with the hype of CCDOW, which sounds like a fun project for all. \
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Post by Tim on Jan 3, 2020 0:54:02 GMT -5
As I said, it was nice that she saved Curtis.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Jan 3, 2020 5:22:52 GMT -5
Thanks, for the nice comments guys. And glad you liked my version of 'Astral Monkey' Dark Avenger.
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Post by Tim on Jan 3, 2020 12:21:24 GMT -5
In your version, Piper still has her guilt. She feels that it's her fault that Curtis is going to jail.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Jan 3, 2020 15:40:41 GMT -5
Which season 1 and 2 Piper would do that I wanted to keep later on personality-wise season 3 when this stories set so she was still that woman and not the person we knew sometimes after Prue died obviously.
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