R&H Chronicles Story No. 52: Unnameable

[Tim]

www.fanfiction.net/s/13472946/1/Rex-and-Hannah-Chronicles-52-Unnameable-The-Statement-Of-C-J-Ward

[Squad 51]

Good one, Tim.

[Melinda Halliwell]

Good in your latest story Tim.

[Tim]

I did a closed loop here. 

Everything happened because they were supposed to happen.

[Matt A, Heir to Bekka Pramheda]

This was really good! And I loved the bit where Hannah remembered Pip telling her about the Blessed Ones' adventure to 1962.

[Tim]

Had fun with the closed loop idea.  Once Hannah got that manuscript, she was more or less committed to making sure that happened.  The reason that only she and Staci could go back to 1923 because that is what the manuscript said. 

I have to admit that the Back To The Future movies did inspire them. 

[Melinda Halliwell]

And they never saw Marty or Doc there did they?

[Tim]

Nope. 

Notice that I split the team up for this one.  While Hannah and Staci were in 1923, Rex and Randolph went to see Matthew Tate.  And they got important info from him, which it happen in the next story.

[Matt A, Heir to Bekka Pramheda]

I think the closed loop idea is amazing! I love it as it proves that a great episode doesn’t need a bunch of action to make it interesting. Your story here, makes me reflect on life and what it’d be like if we had closed loops too.

[Tim]

Note the names Hannah and Staci assumed in 1923, Lois Lane and Lana Lang.  Because, at that point, those names were unknown (as the publication of the first Superman comic was still 15 years away).

[Matt A, Heir to Bekka Pramheda]

I did notice that and I thought it was really neat. I can just imagine the reaction from Carol Jean Ward when saw those in the Superman comic..if she read it.

[Tim]

Yeah, I can imagine too.

Of course, Carol Jean knows that Hannah and Staci came from the future.

[Matt A, Heir to Bekka Pramheda]

That's true, she does know they came from the future.

[Tim]

A future she briefly visiting herself.

Of course, Hannah had to send her back to 1923.